Chasing the Sun

Wow! It's been a long time since my last post (surprise, surprise). Well summer started roughly 2 months ago and I guess it's been going ok. More updates about it later (maybe). But for my posts, I've decided I'm going to post some lyrics that's been brewing in my head for a while. Funny, 'cause I didn't really see myself as a lyric-type of guy. Anyways, feedback appreciated!

Chasing the Sun

Sending another breath to the sky,

blood of the sun entering my eyes.

Deep inside the pain remains,

madly waiting for an end to the rain.

Image of the sunset glow burned into my mind,

nights come that are unlike any kind.

Dawn again, my soul chases the sun,

dusk comes and my mind longs to run.

So yea, that's something I spat out into my journal one day and now I decide to post it.

As I said, feedback is appreciated! :]

And feel free to try to decipher a meaning out of it (Hint: It's an extended metaphor).